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sábado, 26 de marzo de 2016

THANK YOU!!! GRACIAS!!!







Thank you for read our story, we never expected
reach 30,000 visits and we waith to
continue to accompany.
Hugs, see you soon.


Adriana Gutiérrez, author.

viernes, 25 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (67º)










Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year






                                            (Page 44)


       ... A girl with blonde hair and black eyes was born. She was
           called Juliana, as Juli, who didn't know anything because
           it was a secret for her, and who was so moved when
           listening to it with the girl in her arms that she was 
           speechless for the first time.

          




       ... Four months later, Juli and the Captain's son was born, and
           in the next six months, Jack and the Lieutenant became 
           happy fathers.
           The teenagers studied and from time to time they take turns
           to travel and go on holiday abroad, with different aspects
           and identities, but they were always willing to come back
           home, where they were themselves and their children were
           safe, where loving relatives, fight mates, friends in the good
           or bad times, were waiting for them.





                                               (Page 45)


       ... However, Rambo and the men continued active. Nobody 
           lied in honours, but when they went on a mission, they
           did it hiding from their wives, who waited for them with
           a stone on eacy hand.
           Invariably, Rambo said when he was back, "Good luck
           boys. God help you and doesn't abandon me..."


       ... The terrorists didn't ignore the fact that as soon as they
           poked their noses, they would be neutralised, something 
           that had already happened to some of them who
           disappeared without leaving trace.


       ... "OK. Unfortunately, this recruit's avalanche obliges us 
           to be more alert than ever. The mercenaries will see in
           this the rebirth of their business and they will set off.
           They won't waste time and we won't neither.
           Jack, how about the refuges?"
           

       ... Rambo and Robie, who are dancing slower now, give 
           the last turn. She is on her backand he hogs her from
           behind. 
           Their faces are closed to each other.
           They are smiling, with their eyes closed, enjoying the
           well-gained happiness.





End of the prequel of Rambo, the true story:
"Inside the Mountain"
The blog sample fragment of the 46 Pages.
The second part of Roberta Adams's chronicles be
"The Hole in the Sand"
and the third
"Under the southern Ice"
The fourth and fifth so only drafts.

Thanks for joining me up to this point.
I hope to have fun on rainy afternoons.
See you soon, kisses.


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jueves, 24 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (66º)




Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by
her that, whe
became his
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year




                                             (Page 44)


       ... The only person who is not there is Rambo. There are 
           less than ten minutes left, and they, who are connected 
           whit the other shelters, want to see it ai the same that
           the rest of the planet. Robie stands up to go and look 
           for him when he comes in with an expression of:
          "I came for you, but..."
          Rambo sits next to Robie in the first row. Bobby and    
          Shari are next to them. The cinema is small and the rest
          of the people are behind them. Rambo doesn't like the
          idea that the film is based on his life and he is sure he
          isn't going to like it because it must be all wrong.
          But at least, he decided to make the effort and let the
          other enjoy it. Don't make comments, don't criticise
          the actors, nor the action, nor... anything.
          The decision lasted till the first image appeared.
          He started immediately with the name of the actor, "Is
          that a name? Sylvester? It seems to be the name of a
          vegetable... OK: I shut up".
          The presentation finished "with a horrible music... I'm
          sorry".
          And a serious and thin man with a husky voice 
          appears, that, to top it all, walks straight.
          "Oh, my God! What has he got? Something happens
          to him! He doesn't even looks like me! My God!"
          "Shut up!" all exclaim.





       ... And in this way, all the film goes by, and they have to
           listen to one Rambo and the other alternatively (more
           to the real one, of course). When the words "THE END"
           appear, he stand up so furious that he doesn't even
           realise Robie is talking to him.
          "Rambo..." says Robie.
          "Yes, Rambo. Definitely, the actor is a bonehead and
          doesn't speak at all".
          "But you spoke for the two", everybody says.
          "Rambo..." repeats Robie.
          "Yes honey, I know. I promised..."
          "Rambo, I'm already in labour..."
          Rambo opens his mouth and gets paralysed.
          "Oh God! Oh God! Oh God..!"
          So he starts to turn around without doing anything.
          "We'll take care of her. Come on Cora", says Juki.
          The other two wives that were there, also go with them.
          The men, a bit mocking, light up cigarettes and put them
          in his open mouth, making comments such as:
          "And we can't use the missiles..."
          "This is worse than war..."
           "I hope Sylvester was here..."
          "With his knife, he would be able to..."
          Rambo looks at them furiously, throws the sigarettes 
          and gest close to Robie.
          "Are you going to be with me?" she asks.
          "Of course, my love. Anyway, if I faint, nobody will
          know about it".





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miércoles, 23 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (65º)



Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his 
wife, who knew
him when both
were seven year



                                             (Page 43)


       ... A month later, in the main Command room, Rambo has
           met with the staff officers: Jack, Juli, the Captain and the
           Lieutenant.
          "We shouldn't be all in the same place. There are two other
          bunkers as safe as this one, where the marine is. I think the 
          "Hole on the Sand" corresponds to the Lieutenant Sisco,
          where the aviations is, and his wife. Jack, you should go 
          where nobody is left, the land team has always been yours
          and its boss died. Almost all losses were from there. It must
          be reorganised. What do you think?"
          "I knew it and it seems all right for me, boss. I don't want
          to go but I understand thet and I also...I would like to... get
          married. She is near there".
          "Oh! Well, I didn't know it, Jack. You should have told 
           us, man. You can go whenever you want".
           "Of course, boss. Thank you. I know I could have 
           mentioned it but it was never the right moment. You know".
          "Well, so you are determined. Captain, you are staying whit
           us, aren't you? Someone must take Jack's place?"
          "Of course. Sir, thank you", replies the Captain.





       ... Six months later, Robie, who is on the point of giving
           birth, asks Shari if that about the film is true. Juli and
           Cora, who are with her, speak at the same time.
           "Yes, mum, It's true. I said it, didn't I? They made a film
           called Rambo, and belive me, it will not be the one, but
           the first", says Shari.
           "Johny won't like it", says Juli.
           "Let's hope they don't embarrass him or he will burn the
           cinemas", adds Cora.
           A few days later, the film is premiered and they all meet
           to watch it. The copy they got is going to be seen in all 
           the refuges at the same time, a costume the women
           started and the men accepted willingly. This gives them
           a sense of coexistence in freedom, as that of visiting with
           the population of the other refuges to celebrate important
           dates, although this is going to be done three or four times
           at year.
           So, Jack arrived with his wife Adele, a simple and very
           nice German woman; Bruce and his wife Abigail, a black
           captain woman that flies a fighter and Juli arrived with
           Jim, who are married and "waithing", and of course Bobby 
          and Shari were there.
          Just missing a person...






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martes, 22 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (64º)




                 Fragment of the
           prequel of
           Rambo, told by
           her that, who
           became his
           wife, who knew
           him, when
           both were
           seven year




                                                 (Page 42)


       ... Robie looks at Rambo knowing that is a lie, and thanks
           him with her eyes.
           At last, they get to the mountain. Robie is taken to the
           infirmary immediately, but there, they have nothing to
           add to Cora's excellent job.
           Robie goes to see Jack, still hospitalised with a more
           serious wound closed to the heart.
           "May I?" asks Robie.
           "Lady..." and he tries to sit down.
           "Rambo says I must apologise to you...", says Robie.
           "Oh, no...", says Jack.
           "Instead, I'm sure. Could forgive me, Jack? It was my
           fault and you are almost killed. Do you see? I always 
          have to do something bad. You should abandon me on
          an island".
          Robie gets closer and kisses him.
          "Thanks, Jack, for taking so much care of him".
          And touching her belly, she adds, "this baby is lucky, he
         will have the best godparents of the world: you and Cora".
         And she goes out, leaving him again as if he was going to
         say something, as Rambo has left him.




       ... Another week later, Jack is almost recovered and
           protesting all day because he is obliged to be in a
          humiliating wheelchair. He, the second man in    
          charge, who was in more wars than...
          "Oh, God! Jack! Can you shut up once and for all?
         You are worse than women crying! Did you find out
         I asked you?", says Rambo.
         "Yes, boss. Everything is all right in Argentina.
         Satellite photographs have arrived. It seems there
         was a wonderful wedding in the ranch".   
         "¿Really? And who got married?", asks Rambo.
         "She".
         Jack is holding a brown envelope that gives to Rambo
         eithout much enthusiasm.
         "¿She? Only four months and she has already got
         married?"
        Jack shrugs his shoulders.
        "Well, after all, she is a Robinson's widower. I'm happy.
        Of course, what worried me was that she wouldn't recover".
        While Rambo speacks, he is taking out photographs.
        "You know, she was left in this state. She was so bad that...
        No! Oh my God! Did she marry him? My ranch belongs
        now to Abelardo?" His voice is more high-pitched as time
        goes by, "Oh, my God! But he doesn't even know how to
        prepare and serve mate! Oh! My God! Jack!"
        But the only thing that can be seen from Jack is the back
        part of his wheelchair.





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lunes, 21 de marzo de 2016

NOTA DE LA AUTORA






Muchas gracias por las visitas y los mensajes
de aliento, es una alegría inmensa leerlos
y espero tener siempre tiempo para
contestarlos uno por uno.
En cuanto a lo que preguntan sobre los cuentos
cortos, sí, tengo más pero no los he subido 
 todavía porque no los he registrado aún y he tenido
problemas con gente que frecuentaba mi casa
hasta el año pasado, me han sustraído hojas de
cuentos que he tenido que desechar y sé que los
han registrado a su nombre, no creo que los
publiquen, eso solo lo hacen para reclamar después
si yo los publico.
En fin, una decepción más en una ya larga lista
de ellas a lo largo de 4 décadas que por
suerte terminaron.

Gracias de nuevo, A.G.

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (63º)




Fragment of the
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year




                                              (Page 42)


       ... A week later, Rambo is ready to go and look for Robie, who
           is prepared to get out throug the small opening of the lake.
           He doesn't thing there are enemies around, but as there are
           surely free terrorists cells left, Rambo takes the necessary
           security, as if they were in war.
           He doesn't have his submarine that was made him safer, and
           that of the Captain is too big.
           He can't use they recently asquired aviation since they don't
           have where to land, and he doesn't want to take them out of 
           the hole on the sand. He has only the fishers left.
           They are good since the refuge is under the water.
           The supporter group is in the place "cleaning" the area
           since the night before, and several guards are prepared.
           The fishers come in through the same place a week ago
           Cora used to drag Robie.
           Rambo looks at the burning forest on the left and feels
           again the rage of that day. 
           Rambo is already entering.
           He calls his men, who answer him and follows till he can 
           turn around. With the motorboats ready to get out, he
           enters. His eyes look for Robie, who looks at him from
           and starts to cry in silence.
           Cora and the Lieutenant leave.




       ... Rambo goes down the first stairs and hugs Robie 
           saying, "I thought I was going to die, I wanted to
           die without you, God..."
           And then, helping her to go up, he adds, "Come 
           on, honey, let's go home".
           In the motorboat, Rambo and the Lieutenant
           introduce themselves.
           "Lieutenant Bruce Sisco, Sir. Good fight the one you put
           up, and good fright for all... of us... damn it! you're a
           fucker, Sir".
          "It's a pleasure to finelly meet you, Lieutenant, your
           actions were decisive in this war. Thanks to aviation,
          everything finished quickly, and with fewer losses.
          All our people will be grateful to you".
          Then, Rambo looks at Cora saying, "And you,
          undisciplined woman, are punished for your whole life".
          The Lieutenant smiles, and Robie starts to get angry with
          Rambo. "From now on, you will have a sacred task: to
          take care of Robie, that, by the way, you do it better than 
          me". Cora is half proud, half ashamed. She tries not to
         cey, Robie sighs and when Rambo hugs Cora, he tells her, 
         "Listen. Your daughter was not with them". Now Cora can't 
         stand any more and starts to cry. "She must have escaped. 
         If some day she is able to, she will communicate with you.
         Yes?"





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domingo, 20 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (62º)


Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by 
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
him, who knew
him, when
bothwere
seven year




                                              (Page 41)


       ... At twlve o'clock at midday, the press conference stars.
           All the world, and this is not a metaphor, is waiting.
           When the General comes into the room crammed with
           people, an absolute silence falls. Many journalists are
           still outside and they continue arriving. Screens and
           loudspeakers were installed in the streets. The General
           greets and says, "I won't answer any question, but I'll
           tell you exactly what happened. Be patient because 
           I have to go back to history. Well, many years ago, a
           clandestine army started to organise in our country.
           It was parallel, commandes by mercenaries and
           terrorists. They robbed our arms, navies, plane and
           submarines. They trained soldiers, who were no more
           that children kidnapped in the strets, who were sold a
           few months later as cannon fodder". 
           A rage murmur gegins.
          "It was very difficult to identify them. We had them 
           infiltrated and we didn't know who they were. So, we 
           also had to sneak in between them, and operation was
           organised that lasted 20 years..."
           

       ... "Now, I can say..." the General gets moved, so the
           President starts to speak.
           "it seems I will have to finish. Noblesee oblige, I just 
           want to thak for for saving the life of my grandson, who
           was one of the 960 missing children, to the man who
           being a simple soldier, the best strategist I have ever
           met, was able to organise and direct this big operation,
           and I'd like to ask you all to toast tonight for John 
           Rambo, wherever he is.
           That's all, Sirs, thank you".
           In the small refuge, the Lieutenant and Cora shout, "Yes!".
           Robie cries in silence, whit emotion and release.
           In the rest of the world, in each house and place of work,
           wherever there is a guard or a veteran, or a rescued child, 
           all the people taht had a television, bars, shopping malls,
           stadiums, everybody stopped their activities to learn what 
           has happened, and those that couldn't watch television 
           because of their work, such as van, taxi or bus drivers, with
           passengers included, were waiting for the conference next
           to the radio. And when the President finished, after a silence
           of astonishment, the people around the whole planet started
           to clap. Cheering was heard in several languages for a long
           while. In the editorial departaments of newspapers, TV
           channels and radio stations, telephones, didn't stop ringing.
           The journalists wanted to know who the mysterious soldier
           really was, what his story and life was, how he started as a
           simple soldier to finish whit this.


Real image of the day of the 6.000 million people, Octubre 12, 1999.


Author Adriana Gutiérrez
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sábado, 19 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (61º)




Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year




                                              (Page 40)


       ... At eleven 0'clock he is again at the Commands' Room
           with Juli, the Captain and the two children. The Captain
           says there aren't good or bad news, but a great impact of
           the facts in all parts of the world and a great coverage has
           been organised for the press conference, Where it's
           rumoured, the President will assist.
           "What is he going to say?", asks Juli herself.
          "As everuthing was a success, they are going to award it 
           all to themselves", Rambo replies.


                                              (Page 41)


       ... Bobby approaches his father and asks him in a low voice
           and with an air of conspirator, "My mother and you...?"
           "¡No! I mean...no".
           "Oh, because it seems to me that the Captain and her..."
           "¡Bobby! It's not our business... You think?"
           "I think so! She took us to bed and then she disappeared.
            She think she has to cover us".
           Rambo covers his face with his hands and laughing say
           to his son quietly: "Mummy hen takes her chickens to bed
           and then goes to kill the cock..."
           Rambo interrupts suddenly. They had their elbows on his
          knees, and see Juli's boots in front of her noses. "Oh, no!"
          say unisons. They raise their eyes slowly. She is standing
          whit her legs apart, her hands on her waist and she is very
          serious.
          "Which hen house were you talking about?"
          The Captain and Shari, who don't understand anything, only
          see Rambo and Bobby stand up holding their laugh, and 
          Juli, who is very angry.
          "Chickens!", she says. 
           




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viernes, 18 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY ( 60º)





Fragment of the 
prequel of
Rambo, told by 
her that, who 
became hos
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year





                                              (Page 40)


       ... Every time Rambo wants to talk, he coughs and he  can't
           almost see because of his tears. Bobby looks at him 
           smiling, leaves him and then hogs him again, making
           comments such as, "I've always known you are my 
           father, since I was seven, you know? I was sure you were
           going to take us out of there. What a way of getting into
           a place, man! You should have seen them, running from
           one side to the other and calling you desperately to tell
           you that I was alive and the same Shari... She was afraid
           all the time. And when they said they had killed uncle 
           Robbie, she got crazy and attacked one of them. I had to
           take hold of her and... lintes, what happens, dad? Are you
           all right?""
           Rambo looks at him sceptical, and barely says, "Yeah!"
           "Well," says Bobby, "let's est. I'm starving".
           And giving him a pat on his shoulder that makes him 
           stagger, goes away happily, calling him to tell hem 
           everything.
           "Oh, my God! I've created a monster without having been
           there...," exclaims Rambo.
           Rambo heads for the infirmary, comes in smiling, crosses
           his arms and asks, "Have you seen everything?"
          "Yes, boss, it was spectacular. I would have loved to be in
           the submarine! Firdtly, to cut the tentacles to that octopus
           and then, give him the final hit on the head. That of the
           guard was wonderful, and also the news of the children
           appearing everywhere..."
           "Jack... Jack! Can you calm down and lintes to my for a
           minute? I want to thank you and apologise to you", and                    seeing that Jack is going to talk, he adds, "No, wait, you
           joined me for a cause that was only mine. You left                             everything and were loyal to me even when you were
          against me, it was only for my son, and it finished being
          for everybody's sons. Now I can breath at last, I want to
          thank you for not having complained, nor asked.
          And related to Robie..."







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jueves, 17 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (59º)





Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
when both
seven year





                                             (Page 39)


       ... "Goodbye, friend, I'll never forget you", says Rambo.
           And turning around over the smouldering remains, he
           goes to his mountain at high speed, telling the guards 
           that the mission has finished, that as soon he gets to 
           his own fort, theyshould go back to the normal security
           and take care of the small refuge.
           At that moment, Rambo turns around to fix his eyes of
          his con for the first time.





       ... At the High Command, orders have already been given
           to arrest the men that were in the water and who had
           climbed to land trying to escape. But they are all arrested
           quickly.
           The President looks at the General and says, "I'll see if I
           can find my grandson", and picks up the phone.
           "Sir, the missing children are appearing everywhere, in
           hospitals, fire stations, police stations; they tell incredibles
           stories..." says a Lieutenant.
           "Yes, yes... I'll organise a press conference", the General
           replies, and he tells the President "Go back to your house               and wait for your grandson. Whatever his side has been, he
          is safe now. Only four children died, decapited by these
          bastards, and he is not within them".
          "Thank you, but I'm not going home. I don't want to ignore
          anything any more. I'll phone the ministers of those three
          countries to explain them personally what has happened".
          And as the General looked ar him sceptical, he added:
          "You make the conference; I'll tell the truth".






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RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (58º)





Fragment of the
prequel of 
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year




                                               (Page 39)


       ... "¡Come on, take this and take hold of us!"
           In a moment, they are swimming towards the submarine
           with Bobby and Shari being carried with straps.
           They arrive and get in.
           "Make everyone come here. We'll go by air", says Rambo.
           Afterwards, they leave, in intervals of 10 seconds. There
           are four missiles left, so the shelter makes an implosion.
           The men in the water submerge to protect themselves.
           The air force helps without being asked to, bombing the
           remains that are now in fire.
           "Withdraw! Go to the hole in the sand... Did I say that?
           I didn't say that!" Rambo asks himself.
           







In the mountain, a speechless Juli looks at the 
 destruction without knowing what happened with
her son. The Captain is serious and doesn't want
to look at her.
In the small refuge, Robie cries holding Cora. The
Lieutenant keeps silent.
Suddenly, two words appear on the screens, "Got them".
They are only there for a tenth of a second, but it was 
enough for the eyes that didn't get away from them.
"Ready?", asks Rambo.
"As we have never been, boss", reply the men.




So Rambo take the controls. He hasn't looked at the
children once. They are at the back, sitting, wrapped
in blankets. He opens another console and starts
manipulating it. Over their heads, they listen to a strong
crack followed by a sound as that of rubbing. The roof
of the submarine has come off and has fallen into the sea.
Another noise isheard and they starr to move upward
inside the small cabin. Rambo turns on the rotor. The men
in the water watch astonished.
The submarine moves slowly towards the door of the shelter.
The men, horrified, swim desperately to get away of what's
going towards them
The submarine, or what is left from it, full of
explosive, comes in majestically as an ols woman quenn
is meeting her own death, with all the woeld's dignity.

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martes, 15 de marzo de 2016

RAMBO, THE TRUE STORY (57º)





Fragment of the
prequel of
Rambo, told by
her that, who
became his
wife, who knew
him, when
both were
seven year



                                               (Page 38)


       ... This time, the guards don't need to deviate the message, that
           that goes directly to the phone of the War Minister, who had            turned off his mobile phone long ago. The President and the 
           Generak see on the screen the route of the phone call.
           "Well, I want all the phones on the table, Stuart, your's too",
           says the General.
           Feeling sick, he puts his movile phone turned off with the
           others. The President, before the General can do it, takes it 
           and turns it on. Two majors from the army have already
           stood up behind the Minister, and when the mobile phone
           is activated and starts ringing, they take him by his arms
           and take him away.
           The President answers, "Hello". 
           The phone call is short.
           


At the terrorits' shelter, they look at each othet witout
knowing wht to do, jus when Rambo calls them.
"Open the door and start going out swimming. If I see one
vehicle, I'll destroy it. You have less than 5 seconds".
The heavy door starts moving. As soon as there is a crack, a white flag appears. The first people Rambo sees are his son and Shari in a rowing boat, without oars, sitting. Behind them, there are a hundred men in the water.
Bobby is calmed an quiet as his mother; he's hugging Shari, who is pale and crying as hers.
"Yes, bring them", says Rambo.





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